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I want to fall into the wind
and caress the velvet sky
as I take this soul within
and teach it how to fly.

Amid the fire and the rain,
I want to bathe in the light
as I let my tears escape
and fade into the night.

And I want to know how it feels
to be A L I V E.

I want to brush against the sea
and hear the angels resound
as I let this heart be free
to the chorus around.

Amid the stars and the moon,
I want to bathe in the light
until I waken by noon
and begin my true flight.

And I want to know how it feels
to be A L I V E.

'Cause without life, we're not only dead,
but astray from the hope inside our heads.
No, if we wish to really strive,
there's nothing like the gift
of being A L I V E.
:iconserenecyrene:
Tonight was just one of those nights when the wind was whistling endlessly through the trees and it put me in a very poetic mood. :floating: Therefore, this piece was born. Feedback is always appreciated.
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Mood: Wow! ~msimoneaux20 Apr 1, 2013  New member Hobbyist Writer
Ooooooo this is amazing!! Truly inspiring. It's one of those poems that make me feel like I can do anything. Nice rhymes, great flow. Amazing poem, through and through.
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*SereneCyrene Apr 1, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you! You are too kind! :blackrose:
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Yeah!
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Mood: Zest *SereneCyrene Feb 28, 2013  Student General Artist
:ahoy:
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I love this! It has a real lyrical quality to it.
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*SereneCyrene Feb 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you! I was actually thinking of it as a song in my head while writing it. :)
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~TheAngelTears Feb 27, 2013  New member Student General Artist
Love it
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*SereneCyrene Feb 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks! :shamrock:
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*SereneCyrene Feb 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you. :)
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