He likes it! He also felt that your subject fit very well with a discussion we were having just before I came upon your poem and shared it with him. I love it when an artist's creativity has a direct and immediate positive impact on someone - in this case two people.
This is pretty neat, I like it. It makes me think of Zelda: A Link to the Past for the Super Nintendo. When Link and Zelda are escaping through the bottom of the dungeon together and you have to use the lantern to see the way. True love can grow in a situation like that.