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Dreamers often have it hard,
or so that's what I've been told,
for to survive the grasp of a dream,
one must be brightened and bold -

Torch in hand, hand on heart
to flicker a flaring flame
and allow desires to manifest
until they can be proclaimed.
New poem! I hope you enjoy. :halfmoon: 
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Edges-to-Everything Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013
I am sharing this with a friend, wishing he might benefit from it. :)
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SereneCyrene Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you! I'm touched that you chose this poem to share with him. ^_^
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Edges-to-Everything Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
He likes it! He also felt that your subject fit very well with a discussion we were having just before I came upon your poem and shared it with him. I love it when an artist's creativity has a direct and immediate positive impact on someone - in this case two people. :)
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SereneCyrene Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow, thank you so much! :moon: I'm quite speechless. I'm glad that the message had an uplifting effect. And I really appreciate you telling me about it. (:
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Anninhaxox Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
Very pretty! :) 
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SereneCyrene Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks! :dance:
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Anninhaxox Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
You're welcome :) 
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DarkValentine13 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I enjoyed this immensely. So simple, yet the words convey a certain complexity, revealing that there is more to the words than the short verses show. Great job. :llama:
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SereneCyrene Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you so much! I appreciate the feedback. :flame:
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DarkValentine13 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome. I myself am a poet. Feel free to go look through my gallery sometime, if you wish. :)
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SereneCyrene Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Student General Artist
Sure! I will check it out soon. Pixel Rose 
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msimoneaux20 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is pretty neat, I like it. It makes me think of Zelda: A Link to the Past for the Super Nintendo. When Link and Zelda are escaping through the bottom of the dungeon together and you have to use the lantern to see the way. True love can grow in a situation like that.
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SereneCyrene Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Student General Artist
Ah, yes. :floating: Well thank you! 
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JamesDaugherty Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Student Writer
Liked and faved
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SereneCyrene Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you! :blackrose:
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WalkinginDreamlight Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the visual style of your poetry, Serene :)
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SereneCyrene Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks. (:
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Momojiro Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Student Writer
How beautiful, such a pretty poem. I really like it :)
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SereneCyrene Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :aww:
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
To flicker a flarin' flame;  aye lass, flicker away!
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SereneCyrene Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Student General Artist
I intend to. :D
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