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You slowly walked away,
left me solemn in the rain.
I guess it shouldn't be a surprise.
You saw the reaction on my face
when you gave the last embrace.
There began the story of our demise.

And now there's nothing but...
just a cold tear tear, just a hard breath.
A mere moment collapses, nothing is left.
You said your goodbyes, there was nothing I could do.
So I quietly drift away trapped in the memory of you.

Several days pass by
and I think I'm losing time.
Where did my concentration go?
So much anxiety over you,
don't know how I will get through.
But it will be alright, I know.

Still you left me with...
just a cold tear, just a hard breath.
A mere moment collapsed and nothing was left.
You said your goodbyes, there was nothing I could do.
So I quietly drifted away trapped in the memory of you.

It's been a year since then
and the mending has kicked in.
No more struggling against the pain.
Since I gave up on the fight
and surrendered to the light,
only a peace of mind remains.

Once, there was nothing but...
just a cold tear, just a hard breath.
And now I'm left smiling with no more regrets.
You said your goodbyes, it was the best you could do.
Nevermore shall I dawdle in the memory of you.
I originally thought of this as a song, but I turned it into a poem.
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UpInaFlame Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
through the blackness of my evil thumbnail pic i like your poem :p
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SereneCyrene Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Haha, thank you very much. :ahoy:
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Polish-Princess Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well done! I love it :heart:
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SereneCyrene Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks! I appreciate the kind words! :aww:
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skywestphalia Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Now I still remember him.. I still love him :(
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SereneCyrene Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student General Artist
:worry: I know how you feel. I felt that way for the longest time over one guy.
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skywestphalia Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
we're on the same boat then
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kmills95 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love this. I was going to ask if you were going to use it as a song because of the repetition but then you answered that in your description :P I think the repetition adds to it actually :) Love it!
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SereneCyrene Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you very much! :) And yes, the repetition would make it a good song too!
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