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If I could fall so deep
within my sleep,
I'd dream of fantasies
where all is bright,
even through the night
with colors of neon green.
And under the emerald sky
that lingers high,
I'd dip into the blue
where mermaids sway
and little fishes play
until the break of noon.
Then in the fields
where red fruits yield,
I'd climb the golden trees
and feel all the love
of heaven above
as I fly into the breeze.
Then later on
when it reaches dawn,
I'd dance under the sun
that gently beams
and shines upon my dreams
and moves me forever on.
:iconserenecyrene:
Just a simple poem I wrote recently. Not really sure what I think. What do you think? :)
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:icontommyboywood:
~tommyboywood Jan 17, 2013  Professional Writer
beautiful vision of paradise
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:iconserenecyrene:
*SereneCyrene Jan 17, 2013  Student General Artist
I'm glad you think so. :floating:
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:icontommyboywood:
~tommyboywood Jan 16, 2013  Professional Writer
cool
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:iconserenecyrene:
*SereneCyrene Jan 16, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks. :)
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:iconghostfire1337:
~GhostFire1337 Jan 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
when i saw the word "dream" i had to read this XD i love dreaming...

amazing poem, the best i've ever seen in my life.

btw, do you know what lucid dreaming is?
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:iconserenecyrene:
*SereneCyrene Jan 7, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you so much! I've never had anyone tell me that my poem was the best they've ever seen! :blush: :rose: And I think I know what lucid dreaming is. Isn't it when you are conscious of your own dreams? Like you know when you're dreaming?
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:iconghostfire1337:
~GhostFire1337 Jan 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
yusss, and you get to control your dreams.

i achieved lucidity and was able to fly.
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:iconserenecyrene:
*SereneCyrene Jan 8, 2013  Student General Artist
That sounds pretty cool! Most of the time I don't know when I'm dreaming until I reach the very end of my dream. Then I realize that the crazy events happening around can't be real.
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:iconghostfire1337:
~GhostFire1337 Jan 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
dreams are always illogical.... btw, can you add me?
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:iconserenecyrene:
*SereneCyrene Jan 8, 2013  Student General Artist
Sure thing. :)
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